Looks good in the main Duncan. I have a few observations:
1. I noticed (just as you do on here) that you like to overdo the use of CAPITAL letters in some of the text:
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“When You Need Help With Factory Plant Removals, Moving Large Machinery, Machine Handling or Equipment Handling…
…Projector Lifting Service Ltd Will Give You A First Rate Service, Every Single Time”
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2. The links to the photos show duplicated images.
3. There seems to be a lot of use of "
..." after a many statements...!
4. Avoid humour references as they detract from the professional nature of the site, e.g.
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The Operations Manager for Projector Lifting Service Ltd, Paul Wrighting, has just completed a project his colleagues have been hassling him about for a long time ... He lifted the kettle and filled some cups. Managing Director Duncan Rogers stated "It was amazing to watch and so unexpected ... he's never done it before, we're all so very proud of him. Our only regret is that we didn't get a photograph or better still video!" Unfortunately, Mr Wrighting was unavailable for comment.
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5. Use a common type font throughout - rather than different ones as used on the text example above taken from the 'Latest News' links on the main page!
6. Avoid waffling - again it detracts from the professional nature of the site, e.g.
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To cut a long story short
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It may seem a little sad to some that we can still get excited about lifting and installing after all this time
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Hope this helps?
Rob.