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DuncanR

10-03-2010 04:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Paul Eggleton (Post 46116)

I think it looks very good Duncan. My only comment would be to lose some of the cheesy comments e.g. "Whilst Projector didn’t play to a full house … their performance was outstanding"

I think these detract from what is a very professional looking site.

Oh and get the HSE stuff up asap as this is what most folk will look for straight away for this type of work:thumbs:

Thanks Paul, I feel the same about the HSE stuff, especially as I went to arbitration against them ... defended myself and won !!:supz: they werent happy bunnies !

DazBlackCSL

10-03-2010 04:05 PM

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Originally Posted by DuncanR (Post 46136)

Thanks Eddie, just the kind of sensible feedback im looking for :thumbs: .... T$ & others take note !

:whistle: :smt024 :smt047 :smt039

Mark CSL

10-03-2010 04:08 PM

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Originally Posted by cslgirl (Post 46133)

Looks good to me.

All I have to say is... who is the hunk sitting on the machine thingy on the homepage?:whistle:

:hahaha::hahaha::hahaha:
http://www.projectorlifting.co.uk/PLANT.asp http://www.projectorlifting.co.uk/PLANT.asp

DuncanR

10-03-2010 04:08 PM

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Originally Posted by glendog74 (Post 46121)

Looks good in the main Duncan. I have a few observations:

1. I noticed (just as you do on here) that you like to overdo the use of CAPITAL letters in some of the text:

2. The links to the photos show duplicated images.

3. There seems to be a lot of use of "..." after a many statements...!

4. Avoid humour references as they detract from the professional nature of the site, e.g.

5. Use a common type font throughout - rather than different ones as used on the text example above taken from the 'Latest News' links on the main page!

6. Avoid waffling - again it detracts from the professional nature of the site, e.g.

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Hope this helps?

Rob.

I had pointed out the various font changes to the developer, but it hasnt been changed yet. Thanks for the input, appreciate you taking time to help me.:smt055

Mark CSL

10-03-2010 04:09 PM

Your site looks ok :thumbs: After all it tells people what you do and you are no wed wizard :whistle::hahaha::hahaha::hahaha::hahaha:

DuncanR

10-03-2010 04:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cslgirl (Post 46133)

Looks good to me.

All I have to say is... who is the hunk sitting on the machine thingy on the homepage?:whistle:

Well now CSLgirl ... that would......nt be me im afraid :bigcry::banghead:

Yanto

11-03-2010 10:56 PM

Duncan - my 2 cents / no sense.........

1. might think about a different banner style / colouring - IMHO, the font should be a more attractive size / style / design.

2. Avoid use of slang / words used in speech everyday, but less used in the written word - e.g. hassling

3.“When You Need Help With Factory Plant Removals, Moving Large Machinery, Machine Handling or Equipment Handling…

- Too much use of caps...

4. Looks like the gallery link is not finished

Other than that, looks tidy matey :thumbs:

alexk

12-03-2010 07:17 AM

Sent you email Duncan.

Cheers

AlexGTT

14-03-2010 01:33 AM

Duncan, I can only criticize the distinct lack of naked ladies drapped over machinery and plant.:beer: Dirty naked ladies solutions, thank you please.:whistle:

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